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    POF Profile Critique

    So I just got done revamping my profile and was looking for a brutally honest suggestions on making it better and attractive to other females online. I just make sure it doesn't sound weird nor creepy!

    WhiteChocolate00 Drawing, Laser Tag, Buckcherry, Lupe Fiasco,

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    Awesome pictures, except for the main one... get rid of it. The pictures will sell you well, you seem really fun and interesting.

    I did a slight rewrite on your main profile body. You can use it if you want.

    I'll start off by saying that family is one of the most important things in my life. My true friends are who I care for and I'm very close with them. My theory is, you can learn a lot about someone's persona based on the company they keep.

    Drawing is my passion, which is why I plan on becoming an animator when I complete my associate's in graphic design.

    When I'm not at home, watching movies snuggled under a blanket, enjoying the latest video game, or "YouTubing" for laughs, I'm out hanging & laughing with friends, dancing in the clubs, or traveling outside my state on my latest adventure.

    I'm getting bored with the kind of women I meet out at clubs & bars. Beauty is common but having character is rare. Looks may create a spark but if you don't have anything else to offer then it will fizzle out fast. I'm attracted to playful, adventurous, women with a great sense of humor who can actually carry a conversation. So the only question left is:

    Can you keep up?
    Also... Get rid of the "must not be" email filter settings and your good to go.

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    I'd get rid of Metal Gear Solid, Anime, YouTube from your interests.

    I'd actually revise the whole thing with more high value interests.

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    Whats wrong with those things???

    As far as I can tell, anime, metal gear, and Youtube are congruent with who this guy is as a person. This guy is genuine, and the types of girls he will attract with this profile will be the kind he is looking for. I think he has the right dhv's. You gotta start somewhere... But there is always room for improvement. Maybe a little humor??

    I have a friend that works for a video game company and had very similar interests in his profile. Right now is dating a hot nerd girl who loves anime, and playing video games.

    Big Sean has "Teddy Bear Game"... with an edge. Chicks will dig it.

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    Being genuine and congruent means putting your best foot forward, not being straight up about all the things that are bad about you.

    Not that anime or YouTube is bad, but it's generally associated with low value people: pasty, unhealthy nerds who live with their parents. Why stereotype yourself?

    I mean hey, I'm a gamer too, but that doesn't mean I have to tell the whole world about it in order to be congruent.

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    sh4rkb1t3- I understand where you're coming from. Being into anime and videogames might be kinda nerdy and DLVish but as Cubicsilver suggested, as long as it isn't "the center of my life", it just something I like to do while I'm at home. Kinda give girls an idea of what being home alone with me is but I take that under advisement. I just want a girl whose into anime and videogames as well so we have something to talk about our interests and such.

    I also like the whole, "Teddy Bear Game...with an edge" comment! I like that! When I become advance in this game, I will call it, "The Teddy Bear With Edge Method". Quickly alot of people will be like, "The Mystery Method who??" Haha!

    I also like some of the revision. It just something about it that makes it flow better when reading through it. Thanks guys! Appreciate it!!

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    sh4rkb1t3- I understand where you're coming from. Being into anime and videogames might be kinda nerdy and DLVish but as Cubicsilver suggested, as long as it isn't "the center of my life", it just something I like to do while I'm at home. Kinda give girls an idea of what being home alone with me is but I take that under advisement. I just want a girl whose into anime and videogames as well so we have something to talk about our interests and such.

    I also like the whole, "Teddy Bear Game...with an edge" comment! I like that! When I become advance in this game, I will call it, "The Teddy Bear With Edge Method". Quickly alot of people will be like, "The Mystery Method who??" Haha!

    I also like some of the revision. It just something about it that makes it flow better when reading through it. Thanks guys! Appreciate it!!

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