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    Need feedback on my first profile

    So I recently joined POF and didn't really know where to go in terms of what to write on my profile... Saw Cajun's link and pretty much used it as a template (took out parts that I didn't think applied to me, added some that did)

    Any pointers or critiques??

    I know the pictures are not great I plan to get a few better ones (ones were I'm the center of focus and having lots of fun with group of people = better right?)

    The more thorough the critisism the better since I'm relatively new to this PUA stuff... I've read both Mystery Method and Magic Bullets so I have the theory in the back of my mind... I'd just like to see where everything fits inside that theoretical framework!!!

    EDIT: http://www.plentyoffish.com/member10411955.htm



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    no pics dude...you could have posted a link to your page! hell, I'd add you.

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    Haha! Don't I feel retarded now! I edited the post and added the link to my profile

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    You said on your profile that you don't like being on bars or clubs because is almost impossible to enjoy the company of someone else... or something like that and i think that is a turn off for most of the woman, that means that you don't like those kind of places and a lot ( maybe all....) the woman like to dance at least once every two months.

    In fact a lof of girls friends have told me something like that hehe.

    Just my opinion.

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    maybe add a bit about no crazy girls and you're not serious on a dating site?

    the whole paragraph on "by age XY I will ..." got repetitive fast, but do keep the rich descriptive adjectives

    I have to work on mine too, as I'm a beginner as well, good luck!

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    1)"Need help with your anatomy homework?"
    2)"You're so hot you denatured my protiens"
    3)"Hey baby... you want to make a zygote?"
    ** if you understood those... do NOT be shy... if you didn't I have a few books that could help


    LMAO! I understood that...If I had vulva's it would self lubricate for you.

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