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    Can someone crit this OC chat

    Because this has been my lengthiest one so far on okcupid, but it just fizzled out because i was just way too out there/wacky. This shit is my fucking disease, it pisses me off to no end, i just get up my own ass at times like this. fuuuu uuuck.
    This was occuring within minutes, real time basically because it was just past midnight so:

    me: Hi. I dunno what i'm doing lol! I'm serious though!
    Match57% Enemy13% Friend37%

    Nov 22, 2013 – 10:58pm
    her: I'm not, I like to play

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:31pm
    me: liar! you're a lying liar who doesnt tell the truth.

    Scratch that, what did i say to you regards to what? Anyway its so late and i'm tops cause it's my birthday.

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:32pm
    her: at least I'm honest Happy birthday!

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:35pm
    me: thank you.

    Quick question: Are you hispanic or asian?

    LOL

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:35pm
    her: Mexican LOL

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:40pm
    me: . Well thanks for the bday gift , just what i wanted.

    Teach me something.

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:41pm
    her: What do you want to learn

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:45pm
    me: I wanna learn the secret of the world and the meaning of life!!!!!!

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:48pm
    her: Well, If you look at the universe as a whole then life means nothing, it's just a random act.

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:52pm
    me: I'm too dreamy to think about the universe.
    i wanna learn, waminute what do you teach exactly?

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:53pm
    her: English

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:53pm
    me: That's deep , agreed, and its a battle between morals and chaos.

    Nov 22, 2013 – 11:57pm
    her: Yes, The right thing is always the hardest to do though.

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:00am
    me: English huh, i like words too, like fruit and pant.
    I've seen a little English before, like when you see them on the tv guide channel.

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:02am
    her: What's a pant? What do you mean by seen English?

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:07am
    me: I mean those weird ass words on the tv screen. I've seen it, only on tv. Pant is the singular of pants. LOL

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:11am
    her: Pants doesn't have a singular form, LOL. I've never watched the TV guide channel so I don't know the words you are talking about.

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:16am
    me: I love how your profile is really detailed and i gain deeper insight into your psyche. Like being from Los Angeles, that narrows it right down. It appears to me, miss miranda, that we're very hot/cold as shown in our percentages, so your "just for friends" thing need not apply!

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:17am
    her: I mean special kinds of friends

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:20am
    me: Oooh i totally get it, the short bus kind. Alright i understand, i did take the short bus in 9th grade. And it was awesome yo! Cause we ended up knowing everyone on there! I just like short things what can i say!

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:21am
    me: >

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:23am
    her: Ha ha. I mean guys who know how to turn me on. It's difficult you know.


    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:33am
    me: Apparently so when you have your current guy go under the bed and then the other guy comes over to your place, it is unimaginable. I can only imagine it happening, it it seems awkward. Oh don't even look at me, i can't even look at you right now. I'm Inspector Clouseau in that regard, i just crash and bump into everything.

    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:36am
    her: I'm picturing it right now


    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:46am
    me: Yeah ? And, how is it? Does it feel good? Well GOOD for you! That's how i feel all the time! Except for crying in a corner! When i am so conflicted inside and my feelings are .... just being blown apart by an M-80. ;( I never knew what the M stood for though. lol

    Nov 23, 2013 – 1:04am
    Um, did you just send me a msg as sexyrocker and your phone number?

    Nov 23, 2013 – 6:46pm
    her: I don't think so, I was pretty drunk last night

    Nov 24, 2013 – 2:00am
    me: So was I.

    So this: Let's meet and see one another face to face. Imagine that

    Nov 24, 2013 – 2:05am
    me: Tomorrow, 4 o clock at the park.

    Nov 29, 2013 – 7:13pm
    me: You were sexy. I liked you, but you didnt like me. That's ok! Goodbye!

    Nov 29, 2013 – 8:15pm
    her: it's not that your responses are too artistic for me :-) but you seem like a really interesting guy :-)

    Nov 29, 2013 – 9:11pm
    me: I'm just like this here. Also i am kind of shy in the beginning which translates to this , plus we were talking rapid fire so i normally dont like to talk so fast but i did not go away from the computer beause i was basically on my bed,but i know what i like and i like you and i think we can do well together, and i dont play stupid games. in person i am pretty boring sounding. although a girl once told me at work that i had a sexy voice. Whatever that meant. Lots of historic leaders were the same.

    Nov 29, 2013 – 11:20pm
    me: If i saw you in person, i would not be able to leave away from your eyes. Well maybe if i was eating something i'd look at the food too. Because i'm stupid this way, i am a hopeless romantic. my friends keep trying to drag me clubs and bars and , i always just pick one , awwww fugetit.



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    Good work. I used to have the problem you did. Need to calm down on all the banter and do the bare minimum to make her want to meet up. Gave her too much so she lost interest. I've got a whole messaging system. Hit me up if you're interested.

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    Very good till this:
    Nov 23, 2013 – 12:11am
    her: Pants doesn't have a singular form, LOL. I've never watched the TV guide channel so I don't know the words you are talking about.

    After that your kind of repeating the same step over and over and she lost interest. I can tell by her short replies. At this point you should of switched it to attraction then comfort, number close or ask for a meet up.

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    Thank you. Anyone know how to do attraction? All of my messages are basically like this crap. I don't know how to make myself warm up to them.

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