Online game review?

Hey guys! I read the POF tips for online gaming (I believe it's from Cane but can't find the link). I'm not on POF (not many people on it around here) but I have something similar which I decided to use (filled with ladies ).

I used the same openers as Cane does. (I translated everything from French heh, if something sounds weird it probably didn't at first haha). Tell me whatcha think. I got that girl to give me her FB but I wanna know if everything seemed right. Thanks!

Pretty long post heh Tell me whatcha think! (re-read some parts and had problems figuring what it should be to sound the same in English but ohh well.)

Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 20:36
Do you like milk with ice?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:06
Ahahah what am I supposed to say?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:06
Truth!
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:06
Ice in my milk ?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:07
Well yea
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:07
I’d say no but I imagine it’s a trick ?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:08
Not at all. Ain’t too bad, you’re not too weird just yet.
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:08
Your brownies, with or without nuts?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:08
With
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:09
Haaaaaaaaaa. I don’t think this is going to work.
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:09
ahaha without then
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:09
Indecisive, not really attractive!
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:10
Indecisive but honest cause I’m coming back to my first choice
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:10
Taboye! Even more indecisive than I thougth. Ouch ouch
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:10
Okay well I’m back to my other choice… haha just kidding
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:12
Well it’s okay, I’ll get over it for now but don’t ever do that to me again! Now that we know each other a little better, what’s special about you?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:20
I’m a hard-working girl who does things well, otherwise what’s the use of doing them? I love setting goals for myself but even more reaching them! I am an energic girl who loves human contact and who isn’t scared from meeting people. I love travelling, especially the adventure and risk of being at a new place where you know absolutely nothing!
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:21
Not bad. I kinda lika your taste for risk and adventure, but not on my part, not only when you get in a new place. I imagine you’re still a student?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:22
Yeah, human sciences. You?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:22
I’m mostly done with school, waiting to get into X school for a 15 weeks-long course but that’s it.
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:23
Nice project!
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:23
Anything real special about you? Nothing’s on your profile. Ever found a needle in a haystack?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:27
Nah I didn’t. You’re pretty rough with me aren’t you?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:26
Is a girl like you on Facebook?
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:27
Yeah and like you?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:27
A girl like me, I’d say it’s pretty weird.
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:27
A boy
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:28
Maybe if you’d send your Facebook, you’ll discover wether I have one or not
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:28
Marie-Pierre XXXXXXXXX
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:28
Shouldn’t have 2 of ‘em !
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:28
(I ain’t that rough, usually people have to jog in the mud, do 475 push-ups and about 700 sit-ups)
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:28
Ahaha !
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:29
If you have a friend request, it ain’t me!
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:29
Who’s it ?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:30
Gave it to my front neighbour… should be perfect for you. He weights 264 pounds, is 5’4’’ and usually hangs around in a white tanktop with some Cheetos, mustard and ketchup stains.
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:31
You think he’d please a girl like me ?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:31
I don’t know, he’s pretty cool! I am under the impression that you are someone that sees beyond people’s esthetics.
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:32
True !
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:32
Wanna talk on FB ?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:33
Are you trying to pick me up?
Gaboury — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:33
But yeah, it’s alright
Marie-Pierre — vendredi, 29 juin 2012 21:33
Talk to you in 2 seconds


Thanks