POF Critique

I just redid my plentyoffish account. I was having a little bit of success with it before, but I've been lurking here on the forums for a bit now and decided to redo it with some of the stuff I've learned here. Just wanted to post it here and get some opinions on what's good, what needs changing, if the picture selection is good (I'm iffy about it, they're good pictures, but a lot of them are from the same night).

Just lemme know what you guys think. here you go: http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprof...le_id=16846961