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    POF rough draft, Critique me.

    Alright so I never thought I would actually find myself ever making one of these things but I have told it POF can be fun. Also I am not going to have as much time to go out and sarge with being buried in schoolwork(8-12hour classes 5days a week for 12months straight not to mention I am probably doing another year afterward, and it's not rare for me to be there on weekends either) so thought I would come here for your guys feedback before I post it on POF. If you don't like anything, let me know.

    My draft(I did steal ideas from a few people on the forum)

    (username undecided): More fun than your dad drunk.

    Interests:

    Hockey, hopscotch, hacky sack, hummus, hip-hop, hideaways, high fives, hiking, hoedowns

    About Me

    I'm 19 years old and attending Vancouver Film School. I am really passionate about what I do and will make it to Hollywood one day. You can hold me on that.

    Who am I?

    -I'm a recovering travel addict. I blame Europe. I suffer from travel withdrawal at least once a week so I try to get out of the house as much as I can. Not many people can keep up as spontaneous is my middle name.
    -I like to read and watch a lot of movies(I am a film student after all)
    -I am known to take candy from strangers(what can I say, I like to live fast)
    -I am a highly skilled pillow fighter/thumb wrestler
    -I can talk to animals(they rarely respond)
    -I am not one for awkward silences so if we do hang out don't worry because worst case I will just tease you.


    I am not taking this very seriously. I don't play mind games and unless you impress me I will most likely treat you like a bratty little sister.


    First Date:

    How about we dress up in our best clothes, head down to the Porsche dealership and get the keys for a brand new red Porsche and go for a test drive. We will drive through crowds of people as they stare at us in jealousy. They will talk among each other about how much they want to be us and we will speed off. We will head to the most expensive neighborhood in town and go to to an open house. We will tell the owner we are interested just to get his hopes up but then but as we are leaving we will tell him it is just too small for our lavish lifestyle.

    or we can just climb tree's and get drunk.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Kruise View Post
    Alright so I never thought I would actually find myself ever making one of these things but I have told it POF can be fun. Also I am not going to have as much time to go out and sarge with being buried in schoolwork(8-12hour classes 5days a week for 12months straight not to mention I am probably doing another year afterward, and it's not rare for me to be there on weekends either) so thought I would come here for your guys feedback before I post it on POF. If you don't like anything, let me know.

    My draft(I did steal ideas from a few people on the forum)

    (username undecided): More fun than your dad drunk.

    Interests:

    Hockey, hopscotch, hacky sack, hummus, hip-hop, hideaways, high fives, hiking, hoedowns

    About Me

    I'm 19 years old and attending Vancouver Film School. I am really passionate about what I do and will make it to Hollywood one day. You can hold me on that.

    Who am I?

    -I'm a recovering travel addict. I blame Europe. I suffer from travel withdrawal at least once a week so I try to get out of the house as much as I can. Not many people can keep up as spontaneous is my middle name.
    -I like to read and watch a lot of movies(I am a film student after all)
    -I am known to take candy from strangers(what can I say, I like to live fast)
    -I am a highly skilled pillow fighter/thumb wrestler
    -I can talk to animals(they rarely respond)
    -I am not one for awkward silences so if we do hang out don't worry because worst case I will just tease you.


    I am not taking this very seriously. I don't play mind games and unless you impress me I will most likely treat you like a bratty little sister.


    First Date:

    How about we dress up in our best clothes, head down to the Porsche dealership and get the keys for a brand new red Porsche and go for a test drive. We will drive through crowds of people as they stare at us in jealousy. They will talk among each other about how much they want to be us and we will speed off. We will head to the most expensive neighborhood in town and go to to an open house. We will tell the owner we are interested just to get his hopes up but then but as we are leaving we will tell him it is just too small for our lavish lifestyle.

    or we can just climb tree's and get drunk.
    solid

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Cane_ View Post
    solid
    thanks, I am actually really excited for this. I hear there is a lot of fatties but you get lucky once and awhile with HB's that are there for the same reason as you. I hear it's pretty good practise too.

    Once I post my profile I'll throw a link up so you guys can comment on my pictures.

    Saying that, I know I need to look good/be having fun in the pics but I have a lot of pictures that are "silly" that I am thinking about throwing up. ex: me in my Rolo costume for halloween(surrounded by girls of course), an Ariel view of me bungee jumping, me with my ribbon from the new years polar bear swim(wearing pink spandex shorts), me in Ireland for st paddys day dressed up in green/irish flag afro wig/etc.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kruise View Post
    Saying that, I know I need to look good/be having fun in the pics but I have a lot of pictures that are "silly" that I am thinking about throwing up. ex: me in my Rolo costume for halloween(surrounded by girls of course), an Ariel view of me bungee jumping, me with my ribbon from the new years polar bear swim(wearing pink spandex shorts), me in Ireland for st paddys day dressed up in green/irish flag afro wig/etc.
    Alright so here are the pictures I am thinking about throwing up, let me know what you think. Faces blurred out for obvious reasons.




    Yes I know I am not the biggest guy, but everyone loves pink spandex... yes?



    I have been looking through my pics looking for a good profile pic, but I haven't came across any I am happy with(I'm not really a photogenic person) because from what it looks like, it's better to be solo in your profile pic. I am thinking the donkey one above might work though?

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    No doubt ur probably having a blast, but I doubt those pics would work because it shows that u have fun but in a revenge of the nerds kinda way. Make sense?

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Cane_ View Post
    No doubt ur probably having a blast, but I doubt those pics would work because it shows that u have fun but in a revenge of the nerds kinda way. Make sense?
    yeah I get what your saying, I'll re-think my choices.

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