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    Also let me know if all my pictures are showing up, because when I look...they're not.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sh0w View Post
    Also let me know if all my pictures are showing up, because when I look...they're not.
    I can only see one pic, you might have got the rest set to private, so check that.

    Overall, I think the profile is pretty poor. It made me laugh in places, but even then I'm not sure whether many girls would find it funny as well. Given the way it is written you are basically saying, if you don't find this funny then fuck off. That may mean that you are telling most girls to fuck off. Contrary to what some people say, that is not a good thing.

    A few other random comments...

    - The whole first date section paints an image in a girl's mind that you're going to shout BORING at her if she asks you anything. You also rip on normal dates for being boring without implanting a postive image in its place.

    - I don't know why but this sounds kind of creepy to me "take great *care* of my women"

    - This line will probably make her feel that you are judging her..."Seriously, don't even bother talking to me if you can't laugh and have a good time"

    - This line seems insecure... "If you've slept with over 12 guys in your life, you need not apply"

    - This line doesn't even make sense... "The women I date I typically find in real life, but the experiences i have had meeting women offline have been GREAT."

    I'd seriously re-work it if you want to up your response rate.

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    Well, if they didn't find it funny, then i DO want them to fuck off. If a chick doesn't like what I have to say then why would I wanna date her. But I'll take your suggestions into consideration..

    Anyone else ?
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    Heres a problem: WALL OF TEXT. wayyy too much. Be mysterious. Leave shit to the imagination. Heres my profile might give you a good idea of what to aim for.

    LancasterLion Snowboarding, rock climbing, surfing, hiking,

    I get about 75% responses. IMO: DHV, excite the girl, Clearly state your "character" then leave the rest for them to make up and intensify.

    Ive gotten messages like "OMG your profile made me so excited, heres my number i dont do this text/call me."

    PS you only have 1 picture and IMO it comes off try-hard.. If you want to keep that picture you HAVE to post a real full shot of yourself. Girls will assume youre hiding something.

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    Ok so i finally read your profile. Honestly bro, it sucks. You come off as cocky, awkward and not really funny. cockness HAS to be equal parts funny or its not received well. I would completely rewrite it if you want to be taken seriously.


    SHOW your character traits, dont list them!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sh0w View Post
    Well, if they didn't find it funny, then i DO want them to fuck off. If a chick doesn't like what I have to say then why would I wanna date her. But I'll take your suggestions into consideration..

    Anyone else ?
    You're depriving yourself of good prospects here. I'll try and describe what I mean...

    I'm a star trek fan. I love discussing politics. I hate animals. I make outrageous, offensive and probably border line illegal jokes. But do I put any of those things in my profile? No.

    Why? Because if those are the first things a girl learns about me, she'll won't think "This guy is great, I want to have sex with him!!!!!", she'll think "He is a geeky, boring, unfeeling loser who would probably make me feel very uncomfortable"

    That said, it is ALSO true that if a girl genuinely couldn't tolerate a guy with those attributes then I wouldn't want to be with her... I certainly wouldn't change my personality for her.

    However, most girls who would exclude me if I said all those things up front will happily tolerate them (and enjoy them!) once I've sparked attraction, connection and fucked her senseless.

    It's an issue of timing!

    Girls online are looking for reasons to exclude you. Therefore, put your best foot forward THEN, once they are gagging for you (in person) then you can reveal your eccentricities.

    Also I refuse to believe your entire ability to be funny is summed up in that profile. Many girls who will genuinely find you funny in person will not be amused by what you put up in that little text box.

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    hello there you've had some constructive advice already... mungojerry post is just awesome. Sums up online pretty well! I just banged a girl senseless from online and totally baffled her with my high sexual frame (i'm pleased but bear with me) I don't say in my profile I am going to f... u big time and definitely try to lead it that way on the 1st date.

    Girls online say a lot of the time "i'm not just looking to hook up" What they actually mean is I want to hook up but on my terms and do not want you to expect to hook up. Very basic way of putting it.

    I can't see all of your pics.. but the avatar one was really lame. A profile pic of your upper torso or close up of you SMILING is far far far better! The profile is just way too cocky and I'm such a bad boy... and its not funny at all from my perspective.

    Give it a work around... you'll have greater success

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    Jesus christ did you really put in I can't stand black people as a joke in there :-O

    i've no words dude

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