Hooters

[Boogieman]

Well, My first attempt at using the mm on a waitress. I fiqured no better place to try then hooters LOL.. so this is how it goes please commet and let me know wrong or right it would be much appreciated.

Server: Hey guys can i get you something to drink.
Me; Ill have a bud
my friends order a tea
her: I need to see your drivers license
Me what are u kidding me if you want to get to know me all you have to do is ask laughing. We are not getting along can we get another waitress...
her:laughing ill be right back
She returns: ask if we are ready to order
Me I ask what she recommends
Her the chicken
ME Ill have the shrimp I dont trust you
Her so what do you guys do
Me Im a DJ Blah Blah Blah
Her (What I think is an IOI) Oh I love dancing where do you DJ
Me Yeah right you cant dance until you prove it so let me see ...
her I use to get paid to dance.....
Me Oh your a stripper huh?
Her no I use to be a club dancer
Me So I ask her for a pen and paper before she hands it to me i say write something interesting....
Her writes so bs about her pets at home
Me I say wow you not interesting enough how about area code ... ....
her writes her number and hands it to me
Me i hand it back and say I need to know who Im calling..
She when u gonna call i do have a boyfirend...
Me i didnt ask if you had a bf i asked for your number
her so how old are you
me i go into the age routine
her says she is in college and blah blah blah
We finish eating and start to leave
On the way out the door We talk and i say u text me when your bf is not around.. she smiled and text me an hour later i didnt respond..
we had so much fun my friends were asking me were in the heck i was pulling all this stuff from i just smiled ....awesome night This was about all i could remember there were some interactions i probably left out but this was the majority

What did i do right wrong thanks in advance for your help HOLLA

[DeadEyeDick]

Strengths: You were proactive, high energy (from what I can infer) and clear about what you wanted. Your responses to her were effective based on the result.

Needs Improvement: If you posted this and said "I was trying David D's cocky/funny approach" people would have said you did a great job! This is much more David D than MM/EPM. In other words, if you're asking about how you worked the model, I'm not seeing the elements of it here, but maybe others see it differently.

I like your energy and enthusiasm, though, which is better than working the model while half asleep.

Hired guns can be difficult to game. You had a success here, so consider taking more practice strokes in easier environments.

Good post!

Good luck!