Is this good qualification?

[BroesBeforeHoes]

Hola

This is how I usually game the girls in daygame:

Open: Broes: I saw you walking down the street and I though you were cute. I remember I was in London and all the girls there looked like elephants.
I usually throw in a time constraint too.

Transitioning: Broes: You're a visual person because you're eyes goes to the side.

I drop the attraction part because the girls from this point usually are attracted to me.

Qualification:
Broes: I was just in Stockholm and all the goodlooking girls there smoked. It doesn't matter if you're beautiful if you still smoke. Do you smoke?
HB: No
Broes: Good (rewarding her with that knuckle thing).

Here's how I usually get my problemens before the medium and large hoops I think I kinda rush. My goal is to get the conversation as naturally as possible.

Broes: You kinda seem like a smart girl, what's your favourite book?
I then talk about my favourite book (Harry Potter)

Broes: What's you best quality?


What could I do better?

[Psych_]

Honestly bro this comes off a little weird and has you throwing stuff out there that constantly jars the vibe of the conversation which can come across as forced.

The opener is fine but the transition is weird. If it's day game you can simply transition into something situational like what she's doing that day.

As for the qualification it's kind of out of left field...why are you talking about stockholm all of sudden? Maybe transition it by saying "you look just like this girl I met from stockholm, funny thing is she tried to hook me up with all her friends but there was a problem...(here she asks what the problem was)...well they were all really pretty but they ALL smoked which sucked. (then pause and look at her) Oh god you're a smoker aren't you?" Then you can either disqualify or reward from there.

However random qualification lines are always weird and can be creepy use qualification to gain investment and to guide the interaction to where you want it to go. Also don't be stuck on qualifying questions the idea is just to make her qualify. For example if a girl says she has to go to the DMV for something and you look at her and say "oh god you're one of THOSE drivers..." she can then immediately qualify herself saying "no no I'm just going because X".

Qualify in a way that's situationally relevant, that deals with things you actually care about, and that leads the interaction to where you want it to go. Don't just qualify because you feel it's something you need to do as a check list for the PU because it will come off creepy that way.

Learn more on your day game

[LNuevo]

Dude I think those qualifications are pretty good and will probably use the smoker one myself.

I think that the direct "do you smoke" is kind of weird. if she's attracted she will probably agree and qualify on her own HB: "Oh i know! gross! I don't smoke/i hate smoking, blah"