Online profile critique?

[icefyre]

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member6307866.htm

I think it is pretty bad ass myself, just wanted to get some other opinions.

It is fairly obvious that Cajun's profile had a big influence. I still tried to make it my own.

I have pictures but they are set to private for the time being. When I message a girl, I include them. They are good pics, no need for critiques on them.

I have thick skin, so blast away!