DHV Story without a punch ending / Teasing

[Superstar514]

I've been studying PU for about 6 months on, with the training wheels, and have been mostly using canned material. This weekend I decided to test out some new experiments.

I invited an HB8 over to my place and the theme of the night was teasing. I teased her in every single way possible, even in the bed *more on that later*

The DHV story I told her was of one that really happened to me. A couple of weeks ago, I booked a flight to Arizona to visit family. The night before, everything was prepared, my suitcase ready, and the alarm ready for 9am, my flight at noon. The next morning, I wake up and it's 11:30, 30 minutes left for my flight. Apparently, there was lightning that night and electricity went out, so the clock reset itself. I rush, grab everything, drive to the airport which is 10 minutes away, and get to the counter. There's like 5 minutes to departure and there's no way I'm making it. (At this point, she's wide eyed, she wants to know what happens next) So I'm running towards the gate, and I'm carrying my carry-on, and I get to the gate. Guess what happens?

She says what?

I tell her nothing, give me a kiss.


She literally died. She started play-punching me, and got on top and tried to get the ending out of me. However there was no ending lol, I just teased her.

*Oh and I got laid. She later txt'ed me that night that she loved how I kept teasing her, it kept her on her heels and she got goosebumps from it.

What do you guys think?

[versiontwo]

first off... sorry for my typos, im usning a very riny keybboard (n810)

i have a similar story... running through miles of airport, flight cancelled, had to convince 10 people at 10 counters to get me a flight, got it, rushed through security "checkpoints", ran through terminals with 20 pounds of luggage (it gets reallyhaevy) ended up in vegas for 6 hours... got to the job interview (in cali) 30 minutes late with a good buzz and 100 bucks heavier(i called etc)... well it was a marketing thing, got the job, and apparently a great story

never used that as a story... hopefully folks can get imagenitive and build that up. it will always soyund better swhen i say it because it actully happend... well, it is time to go feild test.

i will play with it a bit and a few other routines and try to reply, but you know... sometimdes the beer and ladies get in the way of remembering!

oh yeah... i hate folks with poor grammer so once again... apologies for mine.