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Old 07-21-2008, 09:55 AM
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Is this a good daygame attraction story? The transitioning I'm using before this one is the finger length routine. Don't be afraid to critisize anything, that what makes a winner

The weirdest thing happened to me while I was in the US.
I was sleeping in this really warm room. The person who lived there before was a friend of mine who has skated with Bam Magera and Brian DiCamillio. I was in really deep and lovely sleep, when a girlfriend of mine woke me up. Chriis! What are you doing? Don’t grab my blanket like that. From my friend Maria I later heard that just grabbed a blanket because I was cold. But because I was sleepwalking at that time I didn’t know that. Sleepwalking felt really crazy. I then said “damn I don’t want a girly blanket” and I asked about another one. Isn’t that weird that I even though I was sleepwalking I didn’t want a “girlyblanket?”

The only times I sleep walk is when I sleep in that room. That room gives me special and really calming feeling that makes me sleep deep. It might be a combination of the multivitamin I’m taking and the room. Did you know that if you sleep much as a tenagers you’ll grow taller? There got to something special with that room. You’ll never know what’s going to happen when sleepwalking.





Have another one too:

I took one year at a High School in the US. It was awesome. One some female friends of mine and me decided that we were going on an impuse trip. The stupid thing about impuls tips is that it’s easy to forget that the type of chicks I was with was Laguna Beach chicks. The were very cute, not that all that matters, because for me personality, energy and et positive view on the world important. If you have 2 out 3 it’s pretty good. But the chicks weren’t exactly Lars Monsen (Norwegian outback celebrity).

At least they surived the trip up, and they actually figured out how to make a fire by themselves. Have you ever been on a trip like that? In nature with awesome persons, chillin, just relaxing and barbequing? It was really awesome. If you’re that cute and energetic that you seem we might take a trip together. Anyway we decided that we were going to sleep under sky because the sky was very beautiful that day.

Sudennly I’m waking up and a ugly raccoon has eaten 2KGs of my protein powder. Actually I feel sorry for the animal, because I was very experimental and bough strawberry powder and the taste was ||||ed up. Did you know that if you drink protein powder during puberty you can grow taller? Anyway that had to be a really strong raccoon.
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IMO your stories aren't very good. It seems like you are trying too hard to fit dhv spikes in them where they don't really fit. Also, I didn't really understand the second story, a raccoon ate your protein powder, but you set up the story with a bunch of useless details, that seemed like you are trying to brag (2kg that is what like 4 and a half pound, which is impossible for a raccoon to eat that much, btw). Well, maybe if you have a really killer delivery you will get some laughs, but more then likely not.

For some free help check out these links ( I am not sure if you can post links to other boards or not):

On Being Funny - The Venusian Arts Forum
Frame control: Common story mistakes made by PUAs of all skill levels - The Venusian Arts Forum
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